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alrighty

so try to tone down the complexity of the drums your taking away from the song with complexity of the drums you have a good start my tip to you is adding a bass doing the roots of the intro section to add depth personally id have the "it was a nightmare" then add the bass and build up from there but good start

kk repect for a first song

kk try not useing techono drums for metal and second of all its extremely jumpy main riff is really cool good luck next time

wow

if you dont mind can you give me the name of the sotware beecause fl is not the greatest for classical if you could get back to me it would really be apperciated sound great btw

calm

quite soothing

Jabicho responds:

Hehe, thanks =)

cluttered

its very good only complaint is that is it cluttered at times

me like

preety good i like it tell me when you have finished it

insp. by Daft Punk my ass

take a listen to babe im gonna leave you by led zepline might sound a bit familiar you bastard

brujeria responds:

listen to daft punk you twit! before you leave a comment, not all of us listen to 80's rock, hell I don't even like AC DC let alone any of those bands from that era! the only led zepline song i've heard was that one song that was in the school of rock movie, and i only knew that it was led zepline because it was my friend who told me, also you should listen to this songs finished version "project dreamweaver" you should listen to daft punk's Harder,Better,Faster,Stronger before you make yourself look like an ass next time!

itshows

it really shows that you made in 10 minutes

...epic

love it what program do u sounds like fl to short but 0:05-0:15 needs to be longer i really think you should add on to this

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